haha! very funny. i can see that you have been doing a lot more work on your story. nice build up in the beginning with the rat. it seemed like there were a lot of pauses in the action, though, but that might just be because it was rough. how long did you have to make this? i wish i could show you my cartoon, but i haven't made one.
nice work kevin!
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haha! very funny.
ReplyDeletei can see that you have been doing a lot more work on your story. nice build up in the beginning with the rat. it seemed like there were a lot of pauses in the action, though, but that might just be because it was rough. how long did you have to make this?
i wish i could show you my cartoon, but i haven't made one.
-aaron